Tuesday, January 1, 2013

The Moongate Wish: Chapter Thirteen-Heart Trouble


So, happy new year. Sorry for the long silence. Life decided to happen all over the place. Let's see what Erika and Glen have been up to in our absence.

When this chapter opens, Erika has been in Scotland for four weeks managing that hotel. She's visited the Montroses several times before, but this time is different because we get to see it. They get along well, like old friends, and we hear some news from Bermuda. Lalla's son, Frankie, has an apprenticeship at a flower nursery, and Lalla seems to be making great friends with the owner, if you know what I mean. Nothing under the table about it, just a budding relationship that Erika writes off as probably ending in marriage. Could this be foreshadowing? Nah.

The three of them sit down to a home cooked meal and are thoroughly enjoying it. Then the phone rings and Douglas answers it to find out he's gotta go do an appendectomy. He's a doctor, remember? I didn't. So, he rushes off and leaves the two women alone for the first time since Catrina's great unburdening. She continues her trend. She and Douglas are both trying to be a couple now, so that's working much better for them. She no longer thinks he's uncaring or blames him for their children's deaths, and it scares her to see how she could have lost him. What a good thing she decided to keep trying and make a relationship, huh?

Catrina runs out of the room to cry somewhere else for a moment, and comes back with raspberries and cream for dessert. Then she asks about Glen and Erika. Wait, Erika and whom? Erika says that she and Glen left it in Bermuda and that it's over. Catrina says that's too bad, because she's pretty sure Glen was in love with her. Erika thinks so too, but she won't say it. ...because why would she say anything about love and Glen to anyone ever? Anyway, the permanent manager of Glenbrae Castle's daughter is doing well in New Zealand and they'll probably be heading home in 10 days. The two agree to keep in touch even after Erika moves on.

As Erika's leaving, Catrina gets a chance to say what a wonderful husband Douglas is and whatnot. Then, she can't hold this in any longer: “I just have to tell you, Erika. I wasn't going to because it's really much too early, but...” Erika guesses that Catrina is pregnant and is correct. Maybe I was too busy trying to figure out how Glen was getting back in the novel, but I didn't see that coming at all. Anyway, it seems that Catrina's and Douglas' rocky relationship is in the process of righting itself. If only something like that would happen between Erika and someone else...

Erika drives back to the fancy-pants Glenbrae Castle and there's a message for her from Phyllis Talbot, her stepmother. Erika takes the call in her office, which was a good call. Erika's dad apparently has a heart issue and he's about to die. He was asking for her. So, despite the coldness she's felt for him for years, Erika recognizes when it's time to get over it and she gets in the car to see him. I didn't realize she was so close to them, but it's just four hours from Glenbrae Castle to the hospital where her father is.

Erika is shocked to see how frail her father is, but his eyes brighten when he sees her. Basically, he tells Erika that her mom was super-jealous even when there wasn't cause...and then there was. He couldn't leave Phyllis with a baby on her own so he had to leave Erika's suffocating mother. Erika didn't know this part before, so it puts that whole situation in a new light. Erika's father's wish is for Erika not to hold Phyllis accountable for this and to make up with her. Erika's dad manages to hold on until his other daughter, Erika's half sister, shows up. Deborah, the half sister, Phyllis and Erika are all around him for awhile. Then he slips away into the night.

Phyllis asks if Erika wants to come to their house before she drives back to her hotel. Mindful of her promise, Erika agrees. While she's there, she begins to see Deborah, as a sister. Apparently, Debbie is having similar emotions to what Erika had at 18. Anyway, Erika tells Phyllis what her dad wanted, and says that she's going to try to make it happen. Phyllis says that Erika will always be welcome in their home and Debbie agrees. See? This is the relationship I was talking about being mended. You guys thought that foreshadowing was about something else, didn't you?

Then the doorbell rings. Oh those neighbors, this is not the time for sympathy. Erika volunteers to get the door because Phyllis can't handle that right now. She opens the door to discover a nosy neighbor who saw their car come back and has concluded the old man has “finally kicked the bucket”. She wants to come in and bother Phyllis and Debbie but, remembering her promise and generally being a good person, Erika turns her away. No, I'm just messing with you. It's Glen. End of chapter.

All right. They've only got one chapter to make it up to each other, explain how much they mean to each other and finally make some sort of commitment. I don't think this is the type of book where they'll have to end up married, but I'm not really sure. So, my prediction: Glen looks in shock at Erika and says, “This isn't Gertrude's house.” Erika, assuming Gertrude is one of his women, slaps him and shuts the door. Because her assumption is correct, Glen walks sadly away, never to find Gertrude because she gave him the wrong address.

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